DPS Changes

After the rough cut feedback, I know that the DPS is the weakest element of my magazine. One suggestion was to remove the banner behind the text as it just didn't work properly. I have changed the font to a distorted font as it looks more interesting without the banner and suits the nature of the article. The current positioning of the quote in this image, I think it looks quite good but I'm not totally sure, I may try with a different, smaller banner. I have also adder a banner across the top of the page as that was another suggestion and I think this really helps to give the page a more professional feel.

I felt as though the DPS was missing something, and looked too boring with too much text. I looked at adding some other images from the DPS shoot, but it still looked too boring. After looking at Kerrang magazine, I noticed that many DPS's have little boxes with facts about the subjects of the article. This breaks up the page and looks more appealing to the reader. I put together my own box which gives a review of the bands past, and I think this will look quite good on the DPS.